Great Expectations
All Hallow’s Eve, she was naive,
and he had charm.
Doe-eyed and tall, he held in thrall—
proffered his arm.
She walked beside him, like a bride
in wedding gown,
And when he smirked her strings all jerked—
his puppet-clown.For party night, she looked a fright,
at her own hand.
Mom’s marriage-dress, her hair a mess—
talc through each strand.
The faded rose of drooping hose
and ragged frill,
she looked the part—the broken heart
from Dickens quill.
He wore no rig, to match the gig—
mask set in place.
Drawing her near, he nipped her ear
and licked her face.
As in those tales of ingenues
who meet their fate,
he knew that now the time had come
for his check-mate.
They stole away, shut out the fray
and found a room.
The steel-trap door, an icy floor
she, with her groom.
There Havisham, for swift wham-bam,
gave up the ghost.
Her nuptial gown, rode up and down—
her virtue lost.
licked her face…and made her nuptual gown go up and down…deliciously naughty kat! happy tt!
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Of I like it :)The picture is great too.
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What a delicious Halloween tale! I love the references to Dickens and the comparisons with Miss Havisham. The rhythm and rhyme of this is excellent, Kat, and suits the tone of the poem. I love this! I think your work just gets better and better.
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That is good Kat, more going on in it than I noticed on the first read. Layers like a lace wedding gown!
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Trick or treat, eh?
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The licking the face part – that got me! This poem just rolls easily, like the waves of the ocean.
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Deliciously full of Dickens, Kat. I love the way you've woven the creapiness around Miss Havisham!
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Sexy!
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Wonderful references and layers of images…Happy Halloween, Kat.
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Loved it. Loved the audio as I read the words. Very VERY nicely done.
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This has me in the mood now. The images are so vivid.
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I love the poem, and the podcast! Great take on Halloween! Happy TT!
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Very nicely done…love the smooth rhythm of this one!
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I could really see this scene. Felt somewhat voyeuristic but not enough to look away!
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i *always* enjoy hearing you. this brought back memories of 9th grade and my fears of miss haversham!
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Oh very nice!!! Kat between you and Willow you have set the mood beautifully for Halloween.
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Excellent!! Thanks for sharing that. The talc in the hair, droopy hose, faded frill – perfect.
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Hello Kat,What a wonderful Halloween poem. I really enjoyed this one! How talented you are!Have a great Halloween!Lydia
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Kat, I LOVE to hear you read! You have such a beautiful voice, and your delivery is wonderful. I love the playfulness in this poem, as well as all of those wonderful details. I really love: “For party night, she looked a fright, at her own hand. Mom’s marriage-dress, her hair a mess— talc through each strand. The faded rose of drooping hose and ragged frill, she looked the part—the broken heart from Dickens quill.”What an awesome Halloween poem!
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Great piece… :)Happy Halloween!
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Great poem, love the Dickens reference. Happy Halloween and TT!
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Lovely poemand a picture from the old boxI love it :))))
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This is super, Kat. I have always loved Miss Havisham…And yes, your verse feels effortless, elegant. I continue to be most impressed.
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Oh dear! This was quite good Kat.I love to hear you read it…it gives it that extra UUUUMPH!!
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Oh you were sure on a roll with this one!!
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Fabulous poem Kat! It made me blush!
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that's as descriptive as I've seen today in TT. Sexy stuff!
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Dickens. And “G.E.” as well. My favorite book of one of my all-time favorite classical authors. You did 'em proud. Thank you.
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Oh, very good. What an ending.
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How poetry comes to life, when you hear it in the spoken word. Fangtastic! x
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Such a sad story although the 'real' Miss Havirsham didn't have the luck of her gown going up and down!
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Great poem. I found your blasts from the past first and left a comment there a few weeks ago, Kat!I think you're right about our ages, although I am doing my best not to be of the generation Jones…I am torn a bit as in how do I revive my writing career since library jobs are scarce, amongst other things…Have a good weekend.
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Decadent and naughty Kat! It's great to hear you read your work – your verse flows effortlessly – a great poem for Halloween. I really like the reference to Miss Haversham too. The B&W film starring John Mills and Jean Simons is my favourite version of the film. Your best poem yet – I LOVE IT!Jeanne x
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